凤凰国际英语托福综合写作1概述课件.pptVIP

新托福综合写作;今日上课内容;Purpose of Exam ;Procedure ;Casting Doubt --- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage. --- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge specific claims/arguments made in the reading passage. Problem-Solution --- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to specifically explain how they answer the problems raised in the reading passage. ;独立写作评分标准;综合写作满分要求;综合写作阅读;综合写作阅读;综合写作听力;综合写作听力;综合写作写作;INTEGRATED TASK;INTEGRATED TASK;Example ;SCHOOL UNIFORM;School uniform听力笔记;The first try ;Words and phrases for reading ; Fishing farming is the breeding and rearing of fish in captivity to produce food for human consumption. It is often done in large, penned-in areas on the shores of lakes, rivers, and bays and in inlets connected to the ocean. The fish are raised from eggs and ,when large enough, sold to the public. Although this seems to be a good idea at first, fish farming has a number of safety issues, both to the fish and consumers, which make it a dangerous activity. This fish are kept closely confined in pens, an environment for which they are not naturally suited. This makes the instance of disease higher in captivity than it is in the wild. Due to the proximity between the fish, diseases also spread more rapidly than in natural settings. The chances of some disease going unnoticed and being passed on to the public when the fish are consumed are high. Fish farmers add various chemicals to the water to prevent the spread of potential disease. These chemical additives are also put in the fish’s food in order to help the fish attain sizes larger than they would have reached in the wild. These chemicals, once absorbed into the bodies of the fish, can be dangerous to the people who are dining on them. The fish feed mostly on other fish, which are killed and processed before being