要背的范文版本2.doc

1. 图表阐释类作文结构 Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do Athletes and entertainers Deserve Such High Salaries?. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the chart and the outline (given in Chinese) below: 对表格内容进行描述 说明出现这种现象的原因 你的观点 下图为2007年福布斯中国名人榜部分收入排名 姓名 姚明 刘翔 巩俐 刘嘉玲 胡军 余华 职业 运动员 运动员 演员 演员 演员 作家 排名 1 4 5 8 9 96 结构公式陈列 第一段 概述图表 1.From the chart/graph/table/picture,we clearly learn that总述现象、变化或问题。2.图表中初期的数据或情况。3.However, 图表中数据或情况的变化。 第一段 概述图表 主题句：概括图表所反映的总体现象、变化或问题。 扩展句一：概述图表中显示的初期的数据或情况 扩展句三：概述图表中数据或情况的变化 第二段 说明原因 4.The following reasons can account for现象、变化或问题。5.First of all/ To begin with,第一点原因。6. What is more/Moreover,第二点原因。7.In addition/Besides第三点原因。 第二段 说明原因 主题句：引出下文对原因的说明。 扩展句一：说明第一点原因。 扩展句二：说明第二点原因。 扩展句三：说明第三点原因。 第三段 说明影响、问题或表达观点 8.From my point of view/As for me, “我“的思考或看法。9.可能的影响、问题或注意事项一。10.Besides，可能的影响、问题或注意事项。11. Therefore/To conclude,作出总结。 第三段 说明影响、问题或表达观点 主题句：“我”的思考或看法。 扩展句一：第一点影响、问题或注意事项 扩展句二：第二点影响、问题或注意事项 结尾句：经常是提出建议或作出展望。 参考范文 Do Athletes and entertainers Deserve Such High Salaries? From the chart above we can see that athletes and entertainers earn much more than writers. Yao Ming, as the most famous basketball star, is the richest while the famous writer Yu Hua has lagged far behind. The major reason for this phenomenon is that athletes and entertainers get more attention from the public than the writers, and by taking advantages of their fames they can earn money through ads very easily. As we know, writers cannot be more popular than sports or movie stars. Maybe some people think that this is unfair, for in their opinion, scholars should earn more than stars. But I don’t think so. First, the stars’ salary is just an indication of their hard work and fierce competition; and what’s more, the stars’ splendid career is rather short and many of them have to retire even before their thirties. Finally, the stars bring us so much pleasure and fun, and release