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专题话题作文（Topic composition） 22 special topic composition expression Warning taken from the overturned cart in front The 1. narrative mainly plain narrative and argumentative, lack of vivid and detailed description of the content, look dull, image is not clear, no touching strength. 2. the extensive use of causal inferences and conclusions, the lack of specific vivid facts and reason of the argument, devoid of content, lack of persuasion. With 1.2001 years of national college entrance examination (good) The following is an excerpt from part of the college entrance examination answer, there are plain wrong, you can try to change. (1) Zhang Linqiang comes from a small village, he is only in his village in the county school of high school students, and the performance is quite good. But their family situation is not good, the father is ill, thanks to his mother to support a family, they comfort of the village and his mother said, rest assured, as long as the Xiaoqiang admitted to the University, the village people for him, we all eat a mouth, he has to eat, we all spend a few blocks there, he spent, I cant watch children could not go to university, he is our village of hope. Later, Zhang Linqiang was admitted to the Provincial Normal University, before leaving, all the people in the village to see him, he tears on the car, and with the village head said, he will come back, contribute to the home education, he will do. ...... Zhang Linqiang before graduation, not to the big city to find a job, but to go back to my hometown. All the students of his practices do not understand, he said, I had promised to make a contribution to our home village where education, I can not keep the promise, he told him to leave the village, the students were moved to tears. (2) honesty is the most important in our life. Without faith, will not get the trust of others, you will not have a friendship; no faith, no trust of others, you will not win the reputation in the society, your business is n