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A Beggar-一个乞丐,A Beggar-一个乞丐范文 A Beggar-一个乞丐 英语作文网收集整理 At a street rner squats a beggar He is alas there, under the tree, in the shade Senile as he is, he ruhes in se ragged piees f lth He is there, alas there, lie a sulpture in the street Da after da, thusands f peple pass in frnt f hi hurriedl Se spare ins, st give a qui glane in disgust Hever, it shs e ver uh hat a iserable life a huan being an bear! At the first sight, u ill be appalled that Gd has reated suh an eaiated reature His dar fae is full f rinles, deep r shall The reind peple f the hardship the beggar has experiened His hees are bn hile his ne is s thin His hair is bedraggled lie a nest, a nest ith a at f il hat an ipressive sulpture it is! st f the tie, his uth speas hile his ees are half lsed But ne a pedes trian passes b, he ill eep ndding his head slightl and aut atiall as if a gust f ind had fred hi t d s At the sae tie, he raises his gnarled right hand fr the grund,ururing t beg hat a hand! It is a sea, shriveled hand The rinles in his sin are strething, tisting and in terseting Dirt fills the grves In frnt f hi lies an dilapidated bl ith nl a fe ins in it Believe it r nt, it is re and re diffiult t ae a living b begging Beside hi, there is a sti as sli as his legs as if the third leg f the pr ld beggar The sun is shining in the s, but it desn’t shine ever rner f the rld There are still peple h are nt bathed in the sunshine The beggar is ust ne f the 简 评 本文用生动的语言形象地刻画了一位在路边以乞讨为生的孤苦老人。作者非常注重细节的描写，如乞讨者布满皱纹、饱经风霜的脸，乱蓬蓬油腻的头发，半张半合的眼睛，粗糙的手，瘦弱的腿和脖子，他面前的破碗，破烂的衣服等。还包括乞讨者的动作，如向行人点头，伸手乞讨等。此外，作者还描述了行人厌恶的神色，进一步渲染了乞讨者艰难的处境，以唤起读者的共鸣。 美中不足的是作者对乞讨者的描写没有遵循一定的顺序。描写文的写作一般要按一定的空间顺序组织，如：从上到下、从里到外、从远到近等，使文章显得更有条理。此外，在描写人物时，要抓住其最主要的特征，避免面面俱到。 本文在语言表达上的一大特色是词汇丰富而准确。如bn(hees)，thin(ne)，bedraggled(hair)，gnarled(hand)，strething，tisting，interseting(rinles)，dilapidated(bl)等。作者还恰如其分地运用了一些修辞手法，特别是比喻，如His hair is bedraggled lie a nest，a nest ith a at f il；there is a sti as sli as his legs;he i