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A Singers Death,A Singers Death范文 A Singers Death由英语作文网整理收集 英语作文网 tber 18th, 2002, a sad da t st fans, fr their idl Lu en left the frever It’s reall bad nes t the H usi irles, as ell as t e Lu en, in ind, as alas strit ith hiself in his singing areer His earl sng ere all vigrus and inspiring,partl fr the speial sial envirnent at that tie Later, as the idl singers ae up ne after anther, the ld sngs ere nt fit fr the ung fans, s he tried t hange his stle And these ears, he began t help se ne singers t iprve their sills His sngs ere s influential that the H inister f Finane even used ne t enurage all the itizens t r hard t gether and vere the diffiult bravel Unfrtunatel, abut t ears ag, the nes that he gt aner fle int ur ears Hever, he still ent n singing and teahing He had been struggling ith the disease until the last inute As the nespapers reprted, he didn’t lse his ees hen he died Sene said it as beause he had a ish unfulfilled He had hped t give the last perfrane in H in Septeber, but his illness prevented hi fr ding that It a be the biggest regret in his life It’s als said that he nl eighed 32 ilgras at the end f his life u an’t iagine h uh he had suffered fr the disease But ever tie e sa hi in publi, he as earing a sile The next da, an nespapers reprted his death and siultaneusl praised hi fr his ntributin t the H usi irles and his spirit f struggling against the disease He set a gd exaple fr thse ung peple h dn’t value their lives 简 评 在香港歌手罗文因病逝世之际，作者写了这篇文章，表达了对罗文的深切哀悼。文中，作者综述了罗文对香港歌坛的贡献，如在演唱风格上他不断地变化创新，致力于培养乐坛新人，他对公众的影响力等，颂扬了他与疾病做斗争的顽强精神，最后作者号召大家珍惜生命的价值。字里行间流露出作者对罗文的喜爱，对他不幸逝世的惋惜和对他人格的敬仰。 文中的一些具体细节和例子使文章生动不少，如香港财政司长用他的歌来鼓舞市民努力工作，克服困难；他因未完成最后的心愿而死不瞑目；他在饱受病魔折磨之际仍然面带微笑地出现在公众面前等。 但这篇文章在构思上的一大缺陷是由于对罗文的介绍涉及了多个方面，均是一笔带过，泛泛而谈，没有具体的展开，使文章显得较为空洞、缺乏主题和深度。如果能就其中的某一点层层深入展开论述，人物的形象会更加鲜明、饱满。文章的主题会更为明确，更为深刻。 此外，文中还有几处表达显得生硬，如第三段中the nes that he gt aner fle int ur ears不符合英语的表达习惯，可改为rd ae that he had aner。还有his illness prevented hi fr