天堂之旅-Back from Paradise.docVIP

天堂之旅-Back from Paradise Ba fr Paradise here a I? hat a I ding? I feel as if flating in the sft air, n pain, even n sense Thrugh the darness, I an see a faint light Hever, I feel ver safe, lie a bab in its ther＇s b? I ae up, brilliant ras f light piering ees At the ent, I a stunned b everthing befre eesRivers,lie flating ribbns, are ebellished ith green ills and red peah blsss untains, shruded in ist, are surrunded b the fling ater, pure and blue All these pse a beautiful landsape painting, and I feel as if I had e int it The nderful feeling f being alne, the tittering f birds at dan and the sight f the rising sun shining n trees ae e frget everthing I a s intxiated b the breathtaing beaut that I n lnger feel hungr, thirst r sleep, free f all desires spirit is ging utside bd I tal, I pla, I ath and I feel ith sul I step n the grund and breathe the air Everthing is s lean and freshade-green ills sa in the breeze, trailing their branhes ver the ltus arpeted lae The et grass gives ut a deliate fragrane I al alng the bble stne path fr a lng lng tie Tie stps still! The beaut f the plae is lasting Hever, I begin t feel bred The er f the past life, full f hallenges, petitins, laugh, pain and lve haunts eI used t fight against fate ever da I ened suess after hundreds f failure; I experiened theprfund sadness atthe departuref best friend; I felt the heart beating hen I taled t first lver; I treasured the leisure tie hen I gt everthing dne But n,I a nt the aster f n fate If nl tie uld fl ba s that I uld arefull savur and nteplate the beaut f true life! Everne is pursuing perfetnessHever, if the hle rld is perfet, hat＇s the eaning f being a huan? abe tae a strll, get bred, then? I lve the saing that I lng t alleviate the evil, but I an nt, I t suffer Paradise is paradise Life is ust life 简评 本文中，作者凭借着丰富的想像力，描述了他的一次天堂之旅。作者心目中的天堂像一个世外桃源：杨柳和桃花装饰着绸带般的河流，山水环绕，湖面上点缀着莲花朵朵。作者沉浸在美景中，忘却了一切烦恼和欲望。然而，作者渐渐地对这种没有挑战、竞争，没有欢乐与痛苦的生活感到了厌烦。作者最终体会到：在这个并不完美的世界中，种种悲欢离合，成功与失败才是真实的生活，真实的美。 本文非常富有