中考英语满分特训方案 第二部分 高频话题写作指导 七上 Unit 1-4 家庭课件.pptVIP

* 第二部分 高频话题写作指导 七年级（上） Units 1-4 家庭 写作导图 从昆明近四年家庭类相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常写家庭成员之间的深厚感情，如2011玉溪我爱我的家人。 Show your love to your family Send a gift，write a card/letter，do housework or other things to help them When，how，who，where，your feeling The story between your families Who，look，job，hobby，personality Family member The family 写作范文详见： 亮点句型速成 常用句型：You do as I mentioned above. You can get on well with your parents. 推荐句型： If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents. 常用句型：The person is my mother. 推荐句型： ①The person I love most is my mother. ②The person who often encourage me is my mother. 1. She is a woman of medium build with long hair. 2. My mother gets up the earliest in our family. 3. My father is one of my best friends, and I often talk with him if I have any problems. 4. They often encourage me when I’m in trouble. 5. How can I get on well with my brother? 6. My loving grandfather spends his most of free time with me. 7. I love my parents more than anyone else. 8. Thank you for everything you have done for me. 典例剖析（2011玉溪） 提示：家是一个能让人感到温暖的港湾。在你的成长过程中，家给予了你很多，那么你是否曾用适当的方式对你的家人表达过关爱和回报呢？请以“I Love My Family”为题，写一篇英语短文，通过记叙一件你为家庭做过的事情来体现你对家人的爱。 要求： 1. 词数不少于60；语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以 零分计； 3. 不得以单纯介绍家庭成员的方式来撰写。 【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息： 1. 本篇作文的题材以记叙为主，记叙自己为家人做过的一件事来体现自己对家人的爱； 2. 主要是通过写出事件来表达自己对家人的关爱，不仅仅是介绍家庭成员； 3. 叙述家庭基本情况用一般现在时，描写自己做的事情用一般过去时； 4. 词数不少于60，语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。 【范文点评】 I Love My Family I have a happy family. ①Although my parents are very busy, they try their best to take good care of me. I think I should do something for them. ①although引导的让步状语从句写出了父母很忙，但还是尽力照顾好“我”。表达感激之情。同时，try one’s best to do和take good care of短语的使用显示了作者丰厚的文字功底。 Yesterday was Sunday. I got up earlier