直接因果论证-为什么在我们眼里学校生活是枯燥的？-Why School Is Dull in Our Eyes.docVIP

直接因果论证:为什么在我们眼里学校生活是枯燥的？-Why School Is Dull in Our Eyes 为什么在我们眼里学校生活是枯燥的？ 【内容提示】 学生们谈起假日活动便眉飞色舞，说到回校上课就有点愁眉苦脸。为什么学生们不喜欢学校呢？因为学校生活太枯燥。请你写一篇文章，分析一下其中的原因。是因为学生们不喜欢上课呢，还是什么别的原因？ 【作文示范】 h Shl Is Dull in ur Ees henever e tal abut hlidas, there is alas a prett sile n ur faes But hen e realize ur hlidas ill sn be ver and e have t return t shl, e feel a bit sad This is nt beause e hate stud hat e hate is ur dull life at shl The spe①f ur shl life is nthing re than ur shl, r even the uh saller lassr Ever da, ever ter, e have ur lessns in the sae lassr repeatedl e have n hane t get in tuh ith siet t enrih ur life Shl is ust lie a age that binds②ur thughts and behavirs H an e teenagers sta in a age? Fr the teenagers it is ust tie that ur n haraters are fred ne’s harater ust be ulded thrugh pratie and experienes But the shl passes us nledge erel fr text bs And n student an free hiself fr s an inds f her an e fr ur harater in this a? N, never! e an nt ae free use f ur tie Everda e are fred t d hat e dn’t lie t d Everda e have t stud fr better sres e ust dn’t ant t be slaves f sres Seties e d nt even have tie t read nespapers ne I heard that ne f us did nt even n h Rnald Reagan③ is But st f ur teahers at shl thin that gd sres are re iprtant than strnger haraters The highl praise students h ahieve gd sres instead f praising thse ith strng haraters All f us hpe that life is being riher and riher, and the spe f life uh ider In shl e shuld aquire nt nl nledge, but als learn t understand nature f life If shl life is full f fun and interests, I believe e ill en shl life uh better 【词语解释】 ①spe [s+up] n．范围；眼界 bind [baind] v．捆；束缚 Rnald Reagan[‘rn+ld ‘reig+n] 罗纳德·里根（美国总统名） 【写法指要】 本文作者在引言段为自己立论“hat e hate is ur dull life at shl”。接着，作者在正文中运用因果辩证关系对这一论点进行了直接论证。如果我们把“ur dull life at shl”看作结果的话，那么本文就是由结果推断原因了。作者根据自身的体验和学校存在的事实，分析出了两方面的原因：一是教学脱离实际、脱离社会，二是学校推行的是应试教育。最后，作者的结论是多姿多彩的学校生活才不会枯燥。