人教版英语必修5Unit3periodⅳwriting.pptVIP

* Period Ⅳ Writing 原句 1 Exhausted, I slid into bed and fell fast asleep.(教材 P18)由于 太累了，我爬上床很快就睡着了。 点评 这个句子是由两个简单句合并而成： ①I was exhausted. ②I slid into bed and fell fast asleep. 合并：由于句①和句②之间有“因为……所以……”的逻 辑关系，可以用“exhausted”过去分词作原因状语放句首。 仿写 ①由于对即将从事的工作感到兴奋，李强坐立不安，一晚 都没睡着。 (提示：坐立不安的 unsettled) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②工作一天之后，李强感到很累。他爬上床很快就睡着了。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ Excited about the job to take up, Li Qiang was unsettled, so he couldnt fall asleep all night. Exhausted after a days work, Li Qiang slid into bed and fell fast asleep. 原句 2 However, my friend and guide, Wang Ping, was very understanding and gave me some green tablets which helped a lot.(教材 P18)然而，我的朋友兼向导王平非常理解我，他给了 我一些绿色的药片，对我很有帮助。 点评 这个句子是由三个简单句合并而成： ①Wang Ping was my friend and guide. ② Wang Ping was very understanding and gave me some green tablets. ③The green tablets helped a lot. 合并之第一步：由于句①用来解释说明句②中 Wang Ping 的身份，所以可以用 Wang Ping 作同位语，将①②句合并； 合并之第二步：由于句③和句②之间有一个共同词 “tablets”，可以用定语从句将这两句合并。 仿写 ①我三岁大的表妹丽丽很聪明，并且会背很多的诗歌，这 给很多人留下了深刻的印象。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②我的导游玛丽很乐观，并且对这里的环境很熟悉，这让 我们在遇到危险时做出了迅速的调整。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ My three-year-old cousin, Lily, is very clever and can recite many poems, which leaves a deep impression on many people. My guide, Mary, was very optimistic and familiar with the surroundings here, which let us make instant adjustment when facing danger. 原句 3 Having said this, he spread some food on the table, and produced a bed from the floor.(教材 P18)说完这些，他在桌上摆放 了一些食物又从地板中弄出一张床来。 点评 这个句子是由两个简单句合并而成： ①