高考英语-基础写作指导课件.pptVIP

Standards for Evaluation 句子内容的完整性(Completeness) 句子结构的正确性(Correctness) 句子结构的复杂性(Variety) 句子内容的连贯性(Coherence) 2008广东高考基础写作 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。 [写作内容] 请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍： 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896：第一次成为奥运项目; 1904：中断; 1928：中断; 1932：重回奥运会； 1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛； 现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。 ( 起源 originate; 中断 suspend) Draft 1. Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 2. The sport first appeared in 1896, but it was suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. 3. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. 4. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. 5. The sport has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. Skills for Improvement 名词短语作同位语 介词短语作定语或状语 形容词短语作定语或状语 非谓语动词 with复合结构 不定式短语 简单句、并列句与复合句之间的转换 强调句 倒装句 被动句 过渡性词语、插入语等的使用 Improvement ① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 写作内容： 2006年10月,我国著名歌唱家宋祖英在美国肯尼迪艺术中心举办了名为好一朵美丽的茉莉花的个人独唱音乐会。在音乐会上，她演唱了《辣妹子》、《好日子》等16首经典曲目，三次谢幕之后，她用英语演唱了美国人民非常熟悉的《美丽的美国》，使许多观众感动得流下了眼泪，因为她的精彩表演，肯尼迪艺术中心授予她艺术金奖。这场音乐会加深了中美的相互了解。 个人独唱音乐会: a solo concert 肯尼迪艺术中心: John F. Kennedy Center 好一朵美丽的茉莉花: “What a Beautiful Jasmine” 《辣妹子》、《好日子》、《美丽的美国》 “Spicy Sister” “Happy Life” “America the Beautiful” 三次谢幕: three curtain calls 艺术金奖: Gold Art Award Song Zuying is a famous Chinese singer. In October, 2006 she staged a solo concert at the John F. Kennedy Center. The concert was entit