高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练20（含解析）.docVIP

2015届高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练20 、书面表达（本大题共3小题，共75分） 内容要点：1． 上午11点钟到达机场，然后带着5件行李乘一辆黄色出租车到假日酒店（Holiday Inn）；2． 到达酒店后，发现由于粗心将手提箱遗失在出租车上。不幸的是，未注意到出租车的车牌号；3． 60cm×40cm×16cm；4． 2,000美元的支票；5． 你的联系电话是：0435-3940526。 1. 词数100左右；2. 文章的开头已为你写好。 My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am... 【答案解析】 My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five luggages. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didnt notice the taxis licence. The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetre by 40 centimetre by 16 centimetre. In it, there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three pieces of shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check of 2,000 dollars. Could the finder make relation with me? My telephone number is 0435-3940526. Thank you. Wang Fang 点评： 1. 第一段第3句：luggage为不可数名词，five luggages表达不正确，可改为five pieces of luggage。 2. 第一段第5句：licence意为执照，不是牌照，故the taxis licence可改为the number of the taxi。 3. 第二段第2句：表示度量单位的centimetre为可数名词，应把三个 centimetre都改为centimetres。 4. 第二段第3句：In it过于简短，不必在其后停顿，其后逗号应去掉。 5. 第二段第3句：shirt是可数名词， three pieces of shirts表达不正确，应改为three shirts。 6. 第二段第4句：表示价值时，通常用介词for，故of最好改为for。 7．第三段第1句：make relation with me表达不正确。习作者想表达与我取得联系，可改为get in touch with me或return the suitcase to me。 My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five pieces of luggage. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didnt notice the number of the taxi. The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetres by 40 centimetres by 16 centimetres. In it there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check for 2,000 dollars. Could the finder get in touch with me?