高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练24（含解析）.docVIP

2015届高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练24 、书面表达（本大题共3小题，共75分） 调查显示，近几年我国中学生的健康状况不容乐观,近视眼、肥胖和体质弱等情况比较普遍。请分析造成此状况的原因及其危害，并提出改进措施。【答案解析】 Research shows that middle school students’ health condition is declining obviously in recent years. Most students are near-sighted, some are weak or over-weight and many can’t reach the physical standard. It is absolutely true． What causes such problems? First，many students spend too much time before computers or TV sets. Second，students have to prepare themselves for examinations in the severe competing society．As a consequence ,they spend most of their time on their subjects．Third，many of them don’t form the habit of taking physical exercise regularly． It’s necessary and crucial to find ways to improve students’ health condition．One available way is to do physical exercises at least an hour every day. In addition, a healthy diet is also contributive to it. At last , the schools should take measures to reduce the heavy school-work burdens of the students. 第二节 书面表达（满分30分） 假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求： 1．描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。 注意： 1．短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3．词数120左右； 4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇：告示牌 sign Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【答案解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇看图作文，属于先叙后议的体裁，要点包括： 1. 描述漫画内容； 2. 发表个人感想。 考生在描述图片内容时，要注意图中所给的文字信息，先描写美景，再描写画中人的不文明行为，让美与丑形成鲜明对比；发表个人感想时可适当发挥，但内容要符合逻辑，层次要分明，衔接要自然。 Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last_Sunday,_I_went_sightseeing_with_my_friends_in_the_Fairy_Lake_Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my ey