湖南省湘乡市2016高考英语二轮复习短文改错精编5.doc

湖南省湘乡市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精编（5） 短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid herself in the toilet，because he did not want to pay. But the passenger saw him. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say，“Theres a bum (流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was pass from person to person. But anywhere along the way，it told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped bus and telephoned the police. When the police came，they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway，which resulted from a traffic jam. The police searched for several hour. Of course they found no bomb at all！ 1. 第二句 herself 改为 himself 第三句the改为a 第四句say改为said 第五句pass改为passed 第六句anywhere改为somewhere 第七句told前加was 第八句immediate改为immediately 第九句or改为and 第十句from改为in 第十一句hour改为hours 短文改错 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 Li Hua is a senior three student who devote himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses.In the evening, he studies at home until deep into 2. the night.He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work 3. effectively. In Sunday morning, Li Hua was about to study 4. when his father came up and advised him to have a break. Soon they had good idea. They bought a kite which they 5. liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs 6. where Li Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a 7. picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On 8. Monday, Li Hua was energetic and actively in class. He 9. said it was on