【精选】9分雅思大作文深度讲解――独居的利弊.pdfVIP

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 9分雅思大作文深度讲解――独居的利弊 最近的雅思写作考试中，与社会生活相关的抽象类话题更是已经晋 升为仅次于教育类的热门考点，也是复习准备的难点。今天小编为大家 分享一篇逐句解析一篇前雅思考官simon自写的9分范文的精读，内容 是关于独居好处和坏处的讨论，清晰展现构思过程及每个评分标准的拿 分点。 In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 构思过程： 独居，也就是一个人生活，显然有利有弊，如果选择一边倒观点显 然都站不住脚，很难论证，需要分开讨论平均用力。主体段一段写好处 ，一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻找观点上比较困难或者没有方向 ， 建议大家按照文波雅思教授的方法分类提取观点。本篇考官分别从个人 和经济的角度出发 ，层次分明论证清晰，值得大家学习。 Introduction 1)背景导入 ，说尤其在发达国家的大城市 ，最近几年独居变得更为 常见。 In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world. (句型结构：It + adj. + for sb. to do sth. + 后置状语补充 ，注意完成时has become;注意particularly的用法 ，举特 例方便直接 ，类似especially但语气更强; in the developed world比in developed countries更地道;far more修饰normal代入感强) 2)观点句，我认为这个趋势的影响好坏各半。 In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure. (句型结构：简单句+后置状语;虚拟语气could have;consequences高分词;in equal measure高分搭配) Main Paragraphs 1 1)段首概括 ，一个人住在个人和宏观经济上都有好处。 The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. (句型结构：被动 +后置状语并列;主语the rise in one-person households替换more people choose to live alone，地道高分搭配准确;seen as语法得分点;personal broader economic词汇得分点) 2)分论点1：个人层面上 ，独居的人可能变得比和家人一起住的人 更独立自强(常见观点) On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. (句型结构：前置状语 +主语who从句+谓语比较级 +宾语who从句 ，高分复合句;self-reliant高分词 ，展示词汇量) 3)举例论证+线性推理展开：独居年轻人需要学做饭 ，做家务 ，付 账单 ，管账等重要的生活技能;这样的人增加了就是种正面的发展 A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can