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专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 极智批改网 Smartpigai 批改范文 写作原题2 考生原文3 批改过程6 总评分数8 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 写作原题 Doyouagree ordisagree withthefollowingstatement? People todayspendtoomuchtimeonpersonalenjoyment-doingthingsthey People todayspendtoomuchtimeonpersonalenjoyment-doingthingsthey PPeeoopplleettooddaayyssppeennddttoooommuucchhttiimmeeoonnppeerrssoonnaalleennjjooyymmeenntt--ddooiinnggtthhiinnggsstthheeyy liketodo-ratherthandoingthingstheyshoulddo. liketodo-ratherthandoingthingstheyshoulddo. lliikkeettooddoo--rraatthheerrtthhaannddooiinnggtthhiinnggsstthheeyysshhoouullddddoo.. Use specificreasonsand examples tosupport your answer. 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 考生原文 Although there seems to be a trend that people spend too much time on personal enjoyment than they ought to, as far as I am concerned, our life style and attitudes have changed a lot, therefore we need more time to relax and we cannot simply say that people today spend too much time on their personal enjoyment. First of all, though we sometimes find some passengers playing cell phone games on the public transport such as subway, we may not be aware of the fact that they have to work at least 10 hours a day and relaxing for a moment is reasonable to them. With the development of the economy, most of the white collar workers today have to work extr