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如何写出高分作文之亮点词汇 高分作文标志 　　1四级 120-150字；六级150—180字； 　　2、是否长短句交叉； 　　3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 决胜在于创造闪光点　　下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 　　如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) various 越来越 more and more growing，increasing， rising 面临 face confront 重视 emphasize /stress attach importance to 很多 many vast，overwhelming majority of，quite a few，an army of，an ocean of，a sea of，a multitude of 讨论 discussion debate，controversy 关注 attention focus 发生 happen occur 意识到 realize be aware of 用法示例 It is well known to us all that the supermarket is playing an increasingly important role in our daily life．正如我们所知道的，超市在我们的生活中正在起着越来越重要的作用。 We can not ignore the fact that in recent years many cities are confronted with the problem of heavy traffic． 我们不能忽略这个事实：近年来很多城市面临着严重的交 通问题。 ◆More and more people began to attach importance to the oral ability in English study． 越来越多的人在英语学习中开始重视口语技能。 ◆Quite a few people consider it very important to hold a spoken English test． 很多人认为举行口语考试非常重要. ◆Recently，whether to choose a good university or a good major has provoked a debate． 最近选择一个好的大学还是一个好的专业引起争论。 ◆The issue has been brought to public focu