托福写作真题分析1.doc

In order to succeed , you should be more like others than be different from everyone else. Disagree: a person should be creative and innovative. For example: Steve Jobs- Ipod, Iphone, Ipad. A person should never give up and work hard: For example: Winston Churchill- never give up-success in World War Two Scientists never gives up: Thomas Edison through trials and errors improve electronic lights Edison said : Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine per cent perspiration All school teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge. Agree: knowledge is updated very fast: for example: computer science, physics等方面举例说明知识更新快，language方面也有很多新单词和新说法出现。 teaching skills are developing very fast. For example: The formal cramming method is changed into interactive teaching With PowerPoint, projector, Ipad, teachers have to learn those new skills. Improving school is the most important factor to successful development of a country. Agree: 1) Schools can train talents for the country For example: Harvard Princeton Oxford 等培养了很多economist, Politician, scientist为社会做贡献。可以说美国英国社会的成功很大程度上是那里的教育好，尤其高等教育好。 2) Schools can improve the overall atmosphere and civilization level in the community. For example: 可以说Cambridge, Oxford等就是一个小镇和大学城，整个居民都收到文化氛围的影响，提高市民素质和文化水平，市民可以完善和提升自我，成功的机会更多，所以对整个国家和社会都好！ An efficient leader always tries to make everyone feel that they are part of making a decision. Agree： 1）everyone feels important and will work with enthusiasm and passion. For example: Ex-CEO of GE, Jack Welch respect everyone in the company and invite ordinary workers to meetings and offer them the right to participate in the decision and discussion 最后公司做得很好！ 另一例子 Thomas Edison：他的“发明工厂”，把许多不同专业的人组织起来，里面有科学家、工程师、技术人员、工人共100多人，爱迪生的许多重大发明就是靠这个集体的力量才获得成功的。For example : 可以减少“group think”的后果，不能每次都只听领导的意见，形成group think， 最后导致负面的影响。 It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book rather than doing physical exercise.这个题目可以分两种