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6.3.2开头段写法 讨论类和观点类的开头段包括三句话：背景、改写题目、个人立场表达。 Sentence1： background (general statement) 第一句话：文章的背景(一般的介绍) Sentence 2：rephrase the topic (thesis statement) 第二句话：改写题目(点明论题) Sentence 3： personal opinion or brief description of the main body. 第三句话：个人立场或者中间主体部分的简单描述 背景句写法： 首先，确定题目讨论哪个方面的问题，然后以这个问题为中心，写一句介绍性的话。 ：Some people who have been successful in society don’t attribute their success to the theoretical knowledge they learned from their university．Do you agree or disagree? (题目大意：社会上成功的人并不将他们的成功归功于在大学里学的理论知识。你是否同意?) 这个题目讨论的是个人成功(personal achievement)或者理论知识(theoretical knowledge)，那么就围绕这几个单词写一个陈述句： 开头句一：People have long been interested in identifying the forces that contribute to personal achievement．(人们长期以来都对找到影响个人成就的作用因素感兴趣。) 开头句二：The importance of theoretical knowledge to one’s success is a matter for debate．(理论知识对个人成功的重要性是一个备受争论的话题。)烤鸭们可以记住一些开头句的句型，比如he importance of…to…is a matter for debate.等，并将此运用在不同题目的练习中，这样就可以在考场上迅速写出了。 改写题目 第二句话是改写题目，点明论题。很多烤鸭们在这里容易犯两个错误：一是照抄题目，二是句子过长。解决方法如下： 改写题目，而不是照抄题目。 简洁地改写题目，避免累赘。 ：Do you think it is better to send criminals to ail or let them receive education or job training?(题目大意：你觉得罪犯是在监狱里服刑好，还是接受教育或者工作培训好?) 句：The treatment of criminals has been open to debate in recent years．(对罪犯的处理在最近几年已经被广泛地争论。)那么接下来，很多烤鸭们可能会在开头段第二句把题目照抄上去：Some people think it is better to send criminals to jails than to let them receive education or job training．这样的写法不会给考官留下好的印象。烤鸭们可以通过下面三种方法来改写题目： 1) 加上常用句型: There is much controversy over whether to send criminals to jail or to let them receive education or job training． 2) 改变句子成分的顺序: Some people think that to send criminals to jail is better than to let them receive education or job training． 3) 改变句子成分: Some people think that imprisonment is better than education or job training in treating criminals． 个人立场表达 在讨论类和观点类文章中，第三句话有两种写法：一种是阐明自己的立场；另一种是不阐明自己的立场，而只是简单说文章会讨论什么内容。 ：Children in secondary school study international news as a subject，but some think that’s a waste of time．(题目大意