张剑历年作文解析.doc

91年作文 Section Ⅲ Writing(15points) Directions: A) Title: WHERE TO LIVE—IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY? B) Time limit: 40 minutes C) Word limit: 120 -150 words (not including the given opening sentence) D) Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence. E) Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET. OUTLINE: 1. Conveniences of the city 2. Attractions of the country 3. Disadvantages of both 4. My preference 审题谋篇 提纲第一、二项分别要求讨论城市和乡村各自的优点，第三项要求讨论各自的缺点，显然，对照的写作方法最为合适。第四项要求做出自己的选择，这实际上是对前面讨论的一个总结。按照所给提纲，文章自然分成四段。 参考范文 Many people appreciate the conveniences of the city. With so many supermarkets, shopping malls and recreation facilities within easy reach, for example, city dwellers find it easy to enjoy themselves. Also, they are well-informed and have access to better education and better job opportunities. Besides, the city has better transportation service and health care. So, those who live in cities tend to have better sense of security. But country life is also attractive. With the fresh air, the green trees and the singing birds, country people are close to nature and live a quiet life. They can enjoy the peace and calmness of the pastoral environment there. They can easily make friends with the warmhearted and honest people there. ?? Both the country and the city, however, have their own disadvantages. Cities are being tortured by many problems, such as heavy traffic and serious pollution. And urban citizens are often under pressure. As for rural inhabitants, they may find life far from being convenient, colorful or vigorous. As far as Im concerned, I hate the hustle and bustle of the city. I like the peace and beauty of the country. As to the inconveniences, countryside in China is undergoing great changes, leaving more and more disadvantages behind. So, given the chance, I would prefer to live in the country. 范文点评 总体分析： 由于从所给材料中较容易确定文章的层次和段落结构，所以，应该在表达上多下功夫。该文借助关联词、独立结构、现在分词作定语、多种句型的应用使得行文流