2003~2016年考研英语作文.docxVIP

20032003年的作文以“温室花朵经不起风雨”为题，主题鲜明，易于发挥和扩展。针对两张图画的对策，一般需要比较共性或对比差异，然后第一段做表层的描述；第二段点题的含意，并结合自己在生活中的观察体会，联系实际，举例说明原因；第三段针对图中比喻的社会现象发表己见；尽力发挥自己的英语表述能力，得出结论。Sample 1It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young.Lets take a closer look at the drawings in an ideal condition，the flower blooms.But when moved out of the green house，it perishes under the rain and storm.It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse cant withstand wind and rains. Nowadays the young generation in China，like the flower in the greenhouse，live under the full protection from their parents.Parents want to show all their love to their children.They give their children all the best,things they can afford and do not let their children do anything at home.Selfcenteredness and arbitrariness have become a trait of the young generation.Once leaving their parents,many young people cannot make a living of their own.They may get lost when stepping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties. Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts，but also by people in all walks of life.The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves.Thus,its high time that parents,educators and the government made concerted effects to put an end to this situation.评分20分评语该作文内容切题，包含了题目要求的全部内容，表达清楚连贯，句式多样，用词恰当，符合英语表达方式，该作文之所以能获满分，主要因为其思路切中题目，而且语言规范、行文通畅，语句富有变化，用词准确生动。Sample 2As is shown in the two pictures,the same flower has different fate when put in different situations.When there is protection,the flower blooms beautifully.However,when exposed directly to rain and storm,the flower quickly withers.We can safely come to the conclusion that greenhouse flowers cannot withstand rain and storm.The same is true with our children.As the onechild policy is adopted in China,more and more paren