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写作技巧总结（推荐）怎样使句子多样化?一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外，词汇的运用和句子的处理，也起着决定性作?用。??句子可长可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句，文章必定很单调乏?味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句，读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础，配合适当的并列?句和复杂句。简单句可长可短，通常要加些附属成分，如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词?短语，以及节缩成分。??总之，作者可根据情况，使句子多样化，使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样，但?是句式不同，内容重点也有些差别：??(1)?The?goats?grazed?peacefully?in?the?farm?and?were?unaware?of?the?approaching?hunter.?(并列分句(1)+2)??(2)?Grazing?peacefully,?the?goats?in?the?farm?were?unaware?of?the?approaching?hunter.?(现在分语短语+简单句)??(3)?In?the?farm,?the?goats?grazed?peacefully?and?were?unaware?of?the?approaching?hunter.?(副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2)?)??(4)?There?were?goats?grazing?peacefully?in?the?farm,?unaware?of?the?approaching?hunter.?(简单句+形容语短语)??(5)?As?the?goats?grazed?peacefully?in?the?farm,?they?were?unaware?of?the?approaching?hunter.?(原因副词从句+主句)??(1)和(5)的句式最常见；如果加上其他三种互相交替，句子不是更多样化吗？??最后，看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢？??(6)?The?young?pilot?was?on?his?first?overseas?training.??(7)?He?felt?very?uneasy.?--------------------------------------------------------------------------------??(a)?The?young?pilot?on?his?first?overseas?training?felt?very?uneasy.??(b)?The?young?pilot?felt?very?uneasy?during?his?first?overseas?training.??(c)?The?young?pilots?first?overseas?training?made?him?feel?very?uneasy.??(d)?Extreme?uneasiness?seized?the?young?pilot?on?his?first?overseas?training.??(e)?The?young?pilot?was?on?his?first?overseas?training,?feeling?very?uneasy.??(f)?It?being?his?first?overseas?training,?the?young?pilot?felt?very?uneasy.??(g)?Being?on?his?first?overseas?training,?the?young?pilot?felt?very?uneasy.??(h)?The?young?pilot?was?on?his?first?overseas?training?and?felt?very?uneasy.??(i)?The?young?pilot,?who?was?on?his?first?overseas?training,?felt?very?uneasy.??(j)?When?the?young?pilot?was?on?his/first?overseas?trainging,?he?felt?very?uneasy.??(k)?As?the?young?pilot?was?on?his?first?overseas?training,?he?felt?very?uneasy.??(l)?The?young?pilot?was?on?his?first?overseas?training,?so?that?he?felt?very?un