英语书面表达漫画写作指导.ppt

英语书面表达漫画写作指导 仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写 In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. It’s time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.” 注意点： 1. 保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确 体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 ２. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误 ３. 控制字数，结尾精炼 Too short! Too long! 一篇好的英语漫画作文 Not good! Worse! Neat! Practice: As can be seen from the cartoon, two ladies living in the opposite flat say “hello” when they happen to meet each other. The two women don’t know each other even if they have been neighbors for years. It is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world. As we all know, most people live in apartments. They don’t like to go out after work, and they will stay at home watching TV or playing computer games. They don’t have any connections even with their closest neighbors, who seem no different from people they meet every day in the street. * * * * Tasks: 1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing 2010年江苏省高考说明：writing 漫画类 Difficulties 1. 读图 2. 解意 3. 谋篇 读图 1. 漫画的题目 眼睛 2. 漫画的画面 细节 3. 漫画的文字 观点 4. 漫画的夸张 寓意 读图 题目 画面 文字 夸张 读图 The underwear ( shorts for men and panties for ladies) is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet! 夸张 解意 1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？ 解意 ２. 联系生活，明晰主旨 Imagination! 解意 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！ 谋篇 3 parts: 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon Part 1 Describe the picture The pictu