高中英语作文教学课件--高中教育精选.pptVIP

影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个 因素 1.语篇信息是否完整 2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。 3.是否使用高级词汇 4.是否使用复杂句 5 .卷面整洁,书写工整 * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh 写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过度，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。 * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。 ６５％的学生认为 ３５％的学生认为 １．应该春游 １．不应该春游 ２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康 ２．高考临近，没有心情玩 ３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习 ３．春游耽误学习 * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh Introduction (topic) Body (supporting ideas) Conclusion * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh The outline of the writing: Conclusion paragraph: … Introduction paragraph: … Point 2… Body Point 1… supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh Key words: 1.introduction(topic): 高三学生（senior 3 students） 春游(go spring outing） 讨论（discussion） 2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松（relax themselves ） 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ） 没心情玩（don’t feel like going ） 耽误学习(waste the time) 3.conclusion: in my opinion… * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh Key words:中学生middle school students 身体差in a poor state of health In bad condition 充足的睡眠enough sleep 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 take more exercise and do more outdoor activities 定时吃饭少吃零食 have three meals regularly,eat less non-staple food. 讲卫生 * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh Form/develop the habit of hygiene * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh 主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性 How will you start you passage? 问句： … … 从句： … … Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh 巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系 Pay special attention to the transition sentences: Opinions are divided on the question. * /soft/ scdsfefergreryh The body part Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点） Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go s