Women of achivement课件1.pptVIP

* * Unit 1 Women of achievement Unit 1 Section Ⅳ　Guided Writing 【写作技巧】　 人物类记叙文通常要交代清楚人物、时间、地点、事由，按事件发生的先后顺序依次叙述，写作时要求做到： 1.主题鲜明，内容清晰。故事应有头有尾，要写出事情发生、发展和变化的过程。 2.层次分明，有条有理。记叙时，要有开头、正文和结尾。有时一件大事中还包括几件小事，这就要分清主线和副线，围绕主线安排副线。 3.详略得当，主次分明。写人时，要抓住典型事例和典型行为。对中心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方，要详细叙述；而次要的内容，就要少写或不写。 4.抓住人物的特点，努力运用生动形象的语言。注意动词、形容词、副词的变换，同义词表达的运用等。 如何写人物类记叙文 【常用句型】　 (1)人物类记叙文开头常见句型： It is known that… As we know… He is one of the top… nowadays. It is obvious that… (2)人物类记叙文正文常见句型： Born in…, he… With efforts/hard work, he succeeded in… …make a great writer of himself Faced with…, he chose to stick it out. (3)人物类记叙文结尾常见句型： Such a great person is he that… …be worthy of respect. …be deeply loved by…throughout the world. His name was often referred to. 【写作范例】　 根据下面的提示，以A man of independence为题写一篇短文，报道盲人阿普服务社会的事迹。 (1)18岁生病双目失明； （2）自强自立：做家务，养羊，卖羊赚钱，办广播站； （3）播放节目：农业知识，故事，音乐等等； （4）结果：村民富了，村子有变化，阿普享受快乐。 注意：（1）不要逐条翻译； （2）可适当增加细节； （3）文长：约120个单词。 【参考范文】　 A man of independence Arpu, a man of great determination and independence, has won great respect of the villagers who are getting richer and richer. At 18 Arpu became blind as a result of a serious disease. He couldn’t but learn to do housework and began to keep sheep determining to depend on himself. Three years later he sold his sheep and earned a great amount of money. With the money he set up a broadcasting station, from which different programmes such as agriculture knowledge, stories, music and so on are broadcast(ed). The new information he introduced has benefited the villagers and music has enriched their life as well. His efforts have brought great changes and development to the village and Arpu is enjoying his life by working hard. *