[英语考试]CET4写作技巧讲练.ppt

关于CET4作文 作文分数为142分，占总分的15%。 要求在30分钟之内写出一篇120词左右的短文。 作文体裁包括：议论文、说明文、应用文等。 CET4作文样题 Part I. Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2.?网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3.?我的建议 CET4作文结构示意图 Writing Skills Lecture Series 第一步：审题（1-2分钟） 1.?题目：about online shopping 2.?三个段首句： A段. 提出现象 B段. 分析现象 C段. 表明个人观点，建议  第二步：布局（5分钟）（用英语思维） 段落I. 主题句 +推展句1.（对现象的具体阐述)+推展句2（结果）. 段落II. 主题句(好处)+推展句1（原因1-convenient, time-saving）+推展句2（原因2- diversity of products to choose from） +主题句（问题）+推展句1（原因1-be addicted, be cheated）. 段落III. 推展句1(budget) +推展句2(choose certain online shops or salers)+结尾句1. （统揽全文，呼应中心） 第三步：行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维） A段：第一句-完全翻译提示： Currently Nowadays With the development of economy and science /the internet, online shopping becomes more and more common and it has become a fashion . 近义表达法： 受欢迎- online shopping is growing in popularity ever online shopping is welcomed 行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维） 句子太简单，扩展-同位语，定语从句，状语： 同位语：网上购物是什么：在网络上购买商品与服务的行为 Online shopping is an act of buying products and services over the Internet 定语从句：网上购物的影响：大大地震动了/ 影响了我们的生活方式 Online shopping has been significantly shocking our lifestyles/has made a big impact on our lifestyles. 合并下列三句 Online shopping is growing in popularity ever. Online shopping is an act of buying products and services over the Internet. Online shopping has been significantly shocking our lifestyles/has made a big impact on our lifestyles. 合并：Online shopping, as an act of buying products and services over the Internet, is growing in popularity ever, which has been significantly shocking our lifestyles. 行文（15-18分钟）（用英语思维） 状语：online shopping is welcomed by ? online shopping is welcomed by most people, especially young people 由于？because of/due to diverse reasons. 合并：Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to diverse reasons. Online shopping, as an act of buyin