2011届高考英语二轮专题复习课件（浙江专用）：第28讲 书面表达备考指南.pptVIP

这是一个干巴巴、索然无味的段落，下面加一些连接词及一些语法结构后就会有很大改观。 After I opened the door, I went into the room. It was dark inside the room, so I walked toward the window and opened it. I saw many old women who were doing morning exercises and watched them for some time. 同样这样的内容，下面的改动会精彩得多。 After opening the door, I went into the room. It was dark inside the room, so I opened a window to let in some light. I saw many old women doing morning exercises. I stood at the window, watching them for some time. * 从以上我们可以看出，要使文章写得连贯、流畅，就要准确恰当地使用各种表示时间先后顺序等方面的连接词，以及运用丰富的词汇和得当的句子结构，这些丰富的