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Special Attention: The sentence structure in the professional paper is comparatively unitary and grammatically rigorous, however, to make the paper more readable. Variety is essential. It is the variety in the sentence structure, ways of opening a paper and transition devices that help to avoid monotony(单调) and primer style(幼稚) and enable the author to express himself more effectively. Since sentence structure can be classified as simple one, compound and complex one, the basic structure of a sentence can therefore be varied by compounding thoughts or subordinating one thought to another. It can further be effected by using different sentence structure and by varying their length. Variations of sentence openings can be achieved by beginning a sentence with an adverbial clauses, a prepositional phrase, a non-finite (gerund, participles, infinitives)phrase, an expletive expression(in fact, on the other hand), an adverb, an adjective, or a coordinate conjunction. For example: Computerized systems can operate in one of three modes. (2)The operating modes are batch processing, remote batch processing, and time-share processing. (3) Conventional batch processing met all but one of the design requirements. (4) The exception was accessibility. (5) Batch processing could not provide output to diversified, remote locations in a timely manner. (6) Remote batch processing, as the name implied, could provide batch processing at remote locations. (7) it could do this through the use of teletype-writer terminals as output devices. (8) Unfortunately the response time for remote batch processing is unpredictable. (9) It can vary from a few minutes to several hours. Let us analyze the length, structure and variety of the opening sentence. Sentence length: (1) short, 9w; (2) medium, 12 w; (3) medium, 11 w; (4) short, 9; (5) medium, 14 w; (6) medium, 14 w; (7) medium, 13 w; (8) medium, 10 w; (9) medium, 10 w; Variety of sentence structure: Simple s