2013届高考英语第二轮读写任务总复习课件1参考.pptVIP

第六模块 │ 题型探究 第六模块 │ 题型探究 现在， 我们来看看学生样本： What is a good student? ①Students have different opinions on a good student.Nowadays, some students consider entering a good university is the destination of study.②Others think developing personal interests and rewarding specialties are important. ③John is one of the best students in my class.④He comes_to_school_so_early that he can ask his classmates what he doesn’t know.⑤When he is having a class, he concentrates_on it, and find the problem to_ask_teacher after class.⑥When he is in school, he never_wastes_time to do others.⑦He does the same every day. 第六模块 │ 题型探究 ⑧In my opinion, I think a good student would have such good characters.⑨First, he should have a_good_study_habit.⑩Second, he should set_a_good_goal_to make it come true, because good setting is the strongest force for human motivation.?Third, he should not_waste_time to do others, but use it fully and effectively.?Fourth, he should have many_moralities.?With them, students can use_his_knowledge_in_a_correct_way. 第六模块 │ 题型探究 　　【评论点拨】 本文使用5∶5的比例回答文章的两个问题。回答第一个问题使用一般现在时， 说明John每天的学习状态， 画线部分能够抓住最为重要的事件来写， 比较典型。回答第二个问题使用并列式， 画线部分能够扣紧“好学生”的标准， 但是信息分类比较凌乱。我们建议按照语言的精炼原则修改， 第一个问题表达要更加地道；第二个问题按照德智体的标准进行分类， 使信息更加清晰。 第六模块 │ 题型探究 第六模块 │ 题型探究 【参考范文】 The Qualities of a Good Student This text discussed the different standards of a good student.The judgment changes from being good at school subjects in the past to entering a good university at present.However, now many prefer to develop personal interests and specialties. John is taken as an ideal good student in my class.He gets up early to work hard at math problems.He arrives at school earliest to read English and review vocabularies.He listens critically and takes notes selectively.After lunch and supper at school, he does homework and reviews lessons.The time before bed is for reading.But he has no time for sports and is weak and often ill. 第六模块 │ 题型探究 In my opinion, John is not yet a completely “good student”．My