三书面表达的有效训练1重视语言基础.PPT

* * English Writing 错误分析： 1.句子结构错误：1）主谓搭配不当 It with an area about 35000 m2 There have hundreds of peform for visitor to view admire it. 2)追求复杂的句式和长句，导致句子结构混乱。 It was a man-made mountain have some interesting projects. 3)追求华丽的语句导致错误的出现 As you lying Sunshine Beach with sunlight stroke you body, you will feel comfortable. 2. 书写不规范： 句子开头小写； 用空心圈代替句号；字母四不象；拼写错误 Some situation in films is not ture and it will make people a mistake.In my opinnion… 18 marks 3. 中国式英语 The Happy Valley is a new generation of large theme park in Shenzhen. But I more like Sunshine Beach. 4. 审题不清 6. 乱用连词和从句 What more, it not waste their more time, moreover, the film is interesting. … the original work, the reason of whom is that … 7. 词不达意，逻辑混乱 It’s collection traveling the modernized club are a body. 8. 可以写出看似复杂的句子，但错误很多。 三. 书面表达的有效训练 １.重视语言基础，避免出现低级错误 ２.重视范文练习（背诵） ３.重视知识积累和语言运用 作文A. 27分 无语法错误，字迹清楚漂亮，只有一处添加，开头结尾有新意 作文B. 21分 无语法错误，有涂改 作文C. 18分 几乎无错误，有涂改，字体乱 建议：文章段落一定要清晰 firstly… secondly… what’s more/ in addition Additional example: Para 1. They hold the opinion of watching films because… Others however argue that they prefer to read books because… As for me, I’m in favor of … Para 2. And the reasons of my view can be listed as follows. Para 3. From what has been discussed above, we can conclude… 高考英语书面表达评分标准: 第五档. 25~30分 第四档. 19~24分 第三档. 13~18分 第二档. 7~12分 第一档. 0~6分 第三档(适当): (13-18分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务. --虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有的主要内容. --应用的语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求. --有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解. --应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的. Tips for writing NMET English Writing 要点 1. 涵盖所有内容要点和信息, 确定人称和时态。 NMET English Writing 2. 词汇的应用要贴切,使用多样的词汇,避免重复使用某一单词或短语. NMET English Writing 词汇 1. 多实少虚 : nice 2. 短语优先： I like it. This book is his. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hard-working I am fond of it. ３弃旧取新: Ｗe all have the same chance. possess opportunity This book belongs to him. 3. 应用的句子结构准确并能满足任务的要求,不能逐词翻译,