高考英语写作二讲评.pptVIP

* * 假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封回信介绍你校的变化。注意： 1. 回信须包括图画的主要内容 2. 可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯 3. 词数100左右。 A. 审题： （1）一封信（体裁） （2）谈学校的变化（三年前图1，三年后图2） （3）重点在三年后的描述 B. 题纲及常用结构 1）开头语：收到来信hear from sb. / get （receive）your letter … 2）学校的变化：experience/witness/happen/take place 新教学楼：a new school building 图书馆：our new library 新操场：the new playground 树木环绕：lots of trees, surround, 3）表述方位的词： on one side （on the other side） on the right （left） There be …, in front of, in and around C. 将以上要点扩展成句并连文，注意句与句之间的过渡。 练习表示方位的词组 on one side of the road on the other side in front of the outside around the school at the back of to the left of to the right of have changed have taken on a new look have taken place can see great changes used to be there were be located in lie in stand can see 练习表述内容的动词 Dear Mr. Smith I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place in our school during the past three years. On one side of the road there is a new teaching building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building, our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you will come and see for yourself some day. Best wishes， Yours, Li Hua Dear Mr. Smith, I’m very glad to have received your letter. As you know, our school has changed a lot these years. Let me tell you something about it. If you come to our school, you will see the new play ground and there are more trees inside and outside the school than before. Walking through the school gate, you can find the new library, which takes the place of the old playgroun