中考复习写作课件：地震（周佛娣 钟伟琼梁化中学）.ppt

记住批改符号 1.统一批改符号，例如： 删除 插入 替代 佳句 句子不通畅 If an earthquake happened, what shall we do? 1、批改符号 2、内容要点和分数分布 3、档次和标准 Look the book read Beginning 引出话题。（2分） 卷面书写，酌情加减分（1分） 1 保持镇定……（3分） 2.可以用手或软的东西保护……(3分) 3.当确定震动停止时……(3分) 4.不要乘坐电梯 （3分） 总结话题（1分） 每语句中有错误酌情扣0.5-1分。 Writing Body Ending 作文自评，按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。(满分15分) 作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分15分 第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。 第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。 第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。 （以上为及格线） 第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。 第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。 评分档次和要求： 展示（show your passage） How to keep safe when an earthquake happens ? It’s important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens. We should pay attention to the following:First of all,we must keep calm,and then move to a safe location quickly,such as under the hard tables.Second,we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things.Third,when the shake stops surely,we should run out as soon as possible and try to be far away buildings.If you are outside,remember to keep away from tall buildings. Last but not least,don’t take the lift at this moment. I hope these suggestions can help you a lot . beginning body ending * * * * * * * * * * * 中考话题写作课 Safey and first aid 八年级上册Module 8 Accidents 八年级上册 Module 12 Help 惠东县梁化中学 周佛娣 钟伟琼 earthquake Enjoy a video. 2.How do you feel after watching the video? 1. What happened in the video? A terrible earthquake happened in Japan on March11th,2011.As a result of the extreme(激烈的)earthquake，the huge waves washed away all the coast area northeast of the country.The more serious danger is nuclear power station explosion(核电站爆炸)Though a lot of countries including China have sent much help to Japan,the Japanese are still in trouble,because many people were killed in the disaster. And some earthquakes even cause tsunamis(海啸).It was said that 300 thousand people died i