徐菲 -bring cellphones97-2003版.ppt

--- Xu Fei from Jiaochuan Academy How to write a better composition --- Xu Fei from Jiaochuan Academy How to write a better composition Germany：Students under 16 are not allowed to use cell phones at school. Those who are over 16 are forbidden to use cell phones in class. If they disobey the rule, they will get expelled(开除). America: Since 2007, more than 200 schools have banned(禁止) students to use cell phones at school. Can students bring cell phones to school? Debate(辩论) Group work For Against Rules： Students in each team should stand up and give a reason slowly and clearly in turn. If one team stops for 5 seconds, the other team will continue to give the reason. Polish(润色) the language 词 (words) 句 (sentences) 篇 (passage) 使用手机对学习有不好的影响。 Using cell phones is bad for our study. Using cell phones has a bad __________ on our study. Tip : 恰当运用高级词汇(复杂性) influence Polish the language 字 (words) 句 (sentences) 篇 (passage) Tip 1. Different sentence patterns不同句型 They can use cell phones to search for information in study. Cell phones can __________to search for information in study. They will spend their time sending messages. They won’t communicate with friends. They will spend their time sending messages ___________ communicating with friends. be used instead of Tip2. Proverb/saying 名言、警句 可用于 “beginning”和 “ending”，多用后者。 As the saying goes, “No man can do two things at once.” So I don’t think we can bring cell phones to school. School is a place for study but cell phones often make us less focused on study. “No man can do two things at once.” Failure is the mother of success. Practice makes perfect. Think twice before you do.Do as the Romans do. The early bird catches the worm. 2.三思而后行。 1.熟能生巧。 3.有志者事竟成。 4.入乡随俗。 5.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 6.失败是成功之母。 Match some proverbs Where there is a will, there is a way. Polish the language 字 (words) 句 (sentence) 篇 (passage) Some students agree that students can bring cell phones to school. F