谓语翻译の美感.pptVIP

谓语の美感再造 弓 长 木 白 王 足 各 原文 这孩子不错！他回国船坐二等，我以为他火车一定坐头等，他还是坐二等车，不志高气满，改变本色，他已经懂做人的道理了。 【孩子】：lad（也称laddie）—— the lads表示的就是哥们—— lass（或lassie）即女孩——好孩子 a fine lad，a nice lad 【他已经懂做人的道理了】He already knows how to conduct himself。 “他已经知道如何管理自己”，“他已经知道该如何待人接物”。这样中译回来难免听起来纠结，但原话这样的英译却是非常地道的。 → 作名词用表示“行为”时，behaviour与conduct意思相仿，该如何区分什么时候用哪个？ behaviour偏重在外表方面， conduct偏重在道德方面。 i.e. ：在众人面前守规矩而在暗中不规矩的人，有好的behaviour，却有不好的conduct。 然用来指儿童时通常都只用behaviour。 His behaviour towards her was becoming more and more aggressive. His conduct at school was disgraceful. 译文： Such a fine lad! He came back on the boat in second class, so I thought for sure he’d go first class on the train, but still he went second class. He hasn’t become haughty and proud and changed his true nature. He already knows how to conduct himself. 原文：这孩子不错！他回国船坐二等，我以为他火车一定坐头等，他还是坐二等车，不志高气满，改变本色，他已经懂做人的道理了。 Typical： 虎距龙盘今胜昔， a tiger crouching，a dragon curling, outshines its ancient glories; 简洁美精炼美 原文： 谁知道从冷盘到咖啡，没有一样东西可口： 上来的汤是凉的，冰淇淋倒是热的；鱼像海军陆战队，已登陆了好几天；肉像潜水艇士兵，会长时期伏在水里；除醋外，面包、牛肉、红酒无一不酸。两人吃得倒尽胃口，谈话也不投机。 Tasty; delicious to eat 译文 But as it turned out, there wasnt a single thing edible from the cold dishes to the coffee. The soup was cold, and the ice cream was warm. The fish was like the Marine Corps. It apparently had already been on land for several days; the meat was like submarine sailors, having been submerged in water for a long time. Besides the vinegar, the bread, the butter, and the red wine were all sour. They completely turned their stomach while eating and couldnt hit it off in their conversation either. → 倒胃口 spoil one’s appetite; lack of appetite； lost their appetites be fed up with Translator： Turned turned their stomach → 话不投机 not to talk to the point disagreeable conversation remarks not appealing to the other side Translator： Couldn’t hit it off → 一拍即合：hit it off 原文： 鸿渐放手，气鼓鼓坐在那张椅子里道：“现在还不是一样的吵嘴！你要我留在旅馆里陪你，为什么那时候不老实说，我又不是你肚子里的蛔虫，知道你存什么心思！” 译文： He released his hand and sat down in the chair, fuming. “So n