英语八级考试幻灯片.ppt

Cite examples-----relevant Present statistics from recognized, reliable sources: governmental publications, standard reference works, books and periodicals, authorities who are generally recognized as experts in their field. Organizational plan A. Introduction 1. General statement 2. Thesis statement B. Body (development) .Support 1 topic sentence—support s.--evidence .Support 2 .Support 3 C. Conclusion 1.summery 2.comment/suggestion Errors in Writing1.ill-balanced structure I was able to raise my scores gradually by studying hard and I read lots of books. --- I was able to raise my scores gradually by studying hard and reading lots of books. 2. Connective Repetition Although I worked very hard, but I still failed in the final exam. Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 3. Run-on sentence 1. You will be responsible for this material on the final exam, study it thoroughly now. You will be responsible for this material on the final exam. Study it thoroughly now. 2. Many people think protectionism can halt rising prices, however, the opposite is actually true. Many people think protectionism can halt rising prices; however, the opposite is actually true 4. Redundancy of preposition I would like to discuss about something important that the teacher mentioned about to us during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a dictionary. 5. Informal Abbreviation can‘t，don‘t，it‘s，we‘ll，they‘ve = cannot，do not，it is，we will， they have  6. Too many “get” When I got to the university the first day, I got very surprised when I got to see so many students and beautiful classrooms. I got to think about my life on campus in the following 4 years. = become, receive, find, achieve  Proofreading and Error Correction Before 1996, there were 20 errors, and 20 minutes for the examinee to correct the errors. From 1996 on, there are 10 errors, 15 minutes to correct the errors. The length of the pa