中考英语高分作文秘诀复习课程.pptVIP

中考英语书面表达训练;学习目标;Revision;记叙文的写作要素： 5W 1H;议论文和说明文要素: 2W 1H;Revision;中考作文高分秘诀;谋篇布局——写好篇章结构;Good beginning is half done.;Make a topic sentence.;Make a topic sentence.;Make a topic sentence.;Make a topic sentence.;1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。 2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally ... 最后 In a word, ... 总而言之 In short, ... 简言之 We hope that··· 我们希望 Let’s try our best to .... I believe if we can..., ... will be .... What a ...! / How...!;Make a concluding sentence;Make a concluding sentence;范文2：2007年天津市书面表达考题;注意: 词数80~100 个左右. 2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数. 3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使短文通顺,连贯. 4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名. 参考词汇： the launching ceremony 启动仪式 build up one’s body strength 强身健体 More effective 效果更好 ; “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time. ;优秀范文讲评 ;正文：语言简洁，层次分明;正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气;表示举例或补充 1）for example 2）besides / what’s more/ what’s worse 表示转折 however, but，although, instead of 表示原因 thanks to, because of，because 表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so...that, such...that, 表目的 in order to, so that 表比较 the same as, than, of all ...; Which sentence is better? I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. 2. When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. ;句式富于变化;I was deeply moved and I couldn’t say a word. (good ) 2. I was_____ moved ______ say a word. (better);写作训练; Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. One day, I played football with my classmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs bad