高三英语书面表达讲解与训练.docVIP

一. 本周教学内容： 高三英语书面表达讲解与训练 二. 重点、难点： 1. 牢记要求－－如何写好书面表达的具体要求 2. 了解问题－－分析学生书面表达常出现的错误 3. 基础练习－－如何写出好的句子 如何写好书面表达之具体要求 紧扣主题，内容完整 确定主题，与主题无关的内容可省略。完成书面表达画面及文字所要求的内容。 语言准确、表达清楚。 要用你掌握了的词、短语及句型等表达出正确的英语，切不可写出汉语式的英语。时态错误和不完整的句子被视为“严重错误”。 行文连贯，构成语篇 语篇连贯的标准：（1）通顺（2）恰当使用衔接词（3）时态、人称和数要前后一致（4）上下文逻辑关系清楚 丰富句式，生动精彩 衡量一篇文章的好与差，除了要看写明要点、行文连贯和表达清楚外，更注重看考生能否用词准确、生动精彩。句子的长短变化和句子结构的变化。 字迹清晰，卷面整洁 字迹优美，卷面整齐是直接影响评分因素之一。 分析学生书面表达常见错误 （1）动词与主语关系不清 误：I saw an old man going out of City Park and was about to cross Park Road. 正：I saw an old man going out of City Park and he was about to cross Park Road. 误：But the car ran off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 正：But the driver drove off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 误：The park should charge the entrance fee. 正：The entrance fee should be charged for parks. 正：People should pay for the entrance fee if they go to the parks. （2）句子之间的逻辑关系不清 误：It hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didn’t stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The old man and I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. The old man couldn’t move so I decided to help him. 正：It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didn’t stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. Fortunately, I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. Noticing the old man couldn’t move, I decided to help him. （3）过多的长句使句子复杂化，单一化。 范例1 修改前： A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was very interesting. 修改后： A famous sportsman was giving a very interesting speech. 范例2 修改前 It was about 7:15 am when I reached the place where was just opposite to the gate of the park. I saw a gentleman came out of the park. It seemed that he was ready to come across the road. Suddenly a motorcar appeared in front of him. The car came from the 3rd