2018届高考英语全程训练写作专练(七).docVIP

写作专练(七) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) Our life today has many problems. One of the biggest problems are pollution. Water pollution has made our rivers and lakes dirty. It killed our fish and pollutes our drinking water. Noise pollution makes us to talk louder and become angry more easy. Air pollution is the most serious kind of pollution, what is bad for living things in the world. We need to do a lot of thing to fight pollution. Factories must clean our waste water before it thrown away. We cant throw waste things on the ground. We can go to work by bus and with our friends in a same car. Everybody must help to fight pollution. 【答案】 Our life today has many problems. One of the biggest problems ar pollution. Water pollution has made our rivers and lakes dirty. It kille our fish and pollutes our drinking water. Noise pollution makes us 　 talk louder and become angry more eas. Air pollution is the most serious kind of pollution, wha is bad for living things in the world. We need to do a lot of thin to fight pollution. Factories must clean ou waste water before it thrown away. We cant throw waste things on the ground. We can go to work by bus an with our friends in same car. Everybody must help to fight pollution. 第一处：are改为is。考查主谓一致。主语one of the biggest problems是单数，谓语动词用单数。 第二处：killed改为kills。考查动词时态。由and和pollutes可知，应用一般现在时态，因此用kills。 第三处：to去掉。考查非谓语动词。make作使役动词时，后接省略to的不定式作宾补。[来源:Zxxk.Com] 第四处：easy改为easily。考查副词。副词修饰系动词become。 第五处：what改为which。考查定语从句。这是一个非限制性定语从句，从句缺主语，which指代前面的air pollution。 第六处：thing改为things。考查名词。a lot of在这里修饰可数名词，故用thing的复数形式。 第七处：our改为their/the。考查代词。本句Factories must clean...中主语的是第三人称，所以water也应改被their修饰。同时，the waste water也可以指工厂的废水。 第八处：thrown前加is。考查被动语态。废水与排放是被动关系，故用被动词态。 第九处：and改为or。考查连词。本句讲的是我们上班可以选用两种方式中的一种，所以用or表选择关系，而and表示两者都使用，不合理。 第十处：a改为the。考查冠词。同一辆车，用the same car。 第二节　书面表达(满分25分) (2018·黄冈检测) 假设你叫李华，作为高三毕业生代表，你将在学校举办的毕业晚会上用英文作一个简短的告别演讲。内容要点如下： 1．对三年高中生活的怀念； 2．对老师的感谢； 3．对母校的祝福。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 D