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外在美和内在美,作文 篇一：充满内在美的作文评价 充满内在美的作文评价 作文教学的评价机制主要是指作文教学活动与结果做出的一系列的价值判断行为，它贯穿于教学活动的始终，是提高学生作文兴趣的重要手段。目前的作文教学中教师辛辛苦苦给学生们的作文左批右改，写上大段的评语，学生或认真拜读，或只关注成绩，之后，都渐抛脑后，教师的辛劳付之东流。学生的作文评价，多多少少成了语文教师不得已而为之，学生又从中获益甚少的一桩苦差事。现在的老师在批改作文时更多地关注于孩子的作文是否通顺，文笔是否花团锦簇，学生的语言越来越华丽，内容更却越来越空洞，情感也越来越虚假，这样的文章却往往能得到老师的好评。 一、尊重学生的主体作用，激发写作兴趣 “趣浓劳轻，乐此不疲。”兴趣是治愈恐惧的一剂良药。通过各种方式激发学生的写作兴趣能使学生较快进入角色，克服作文“恐惧症”。 1.创设写作情境，激发学生的写作兴趣。学生初学作文，最大的难题是：“没东西可写”，教师必须循序渐进地引导学生解决这个问题。为学生创设写作情境，如预先布置学生去观察某一特定的景物，或参加某一次活动，或记述熟悉的某一个人，这样学生就有话可说，容易完成作文。其中，生动幽默的导言或猜谜是激发学生写作兴趣的有效途径。比如，在要求学生写一种水果之前，我设计了这样一个小故事：“有一天，唐僧师徒四人来到火焰山，又热又渴。可是行李里只有一个苹果，怎么分呢？唐僧提议谁把苹果的特点说得详 篇二：外在美VS。内在美英文 Inner Beauty VS. External Beauty XXX If someone asks me which is more important between inner beauty and external beauty, I think I will not hesitate to choose the inner beauty. External beauty is easy to be found and forgotten, so it is unimpressive and fleeting. A person who just pursues gorgeous appearance but never pays close attention to innermost being is lamentable. This kind of person is like a shell without real substance. He can not gain respect from others, and can hardly make any achievement. So, external beauty actually can hardly represent anything, it only can prove that your gene is good. However, inner beauty is the beauty of the inner spiritual world. It is the concrete manifestations of people#39;s thoughts, morality, sentiment and character. Inner beauty includes philosophy, ideal of life, ideological consciousness, moral sentiment, perseverance, sentiment, cultural origin and so on. Correct philosophy and ideal of life, noble moral sent iment and rich cultural origin constitute a person#39;s inner beauty. Inner beauty reflects a person#39;s essence, and also reflects the essence of social beauty. Though external beauty is also very important, I think inner beauty is an essential which determines whether a person is beautiful or ugly, so to speak. So, if you want to be a really beautiful person, please take pr