历年高三高考写作体裁教程.pptVIP

change phrases into single words Change unnecessary clauses into phrases Change useless passive into active Summaries: Improve the following sentence(1) 1. Although Chinese is regularly used by students, a close and complete study of the subject is seldom taken by them. (Although students regularly use Chinese, they seldom take a close and complete study of the subject.) 2.I am familiar with the farmers who are planning to attend the meeting which is fixed for next Friday. Improve the sentence(2) (I am familiar with the farmers planning to attend the meeting fixed for next Friday) 3. The decision that was reached by the committee was to put off the vote. (The committee reached the decision to put off the vote.) (The committee decided to put off the vote) Improve the sentence(3) Make the passage short and clear We’re so glad you will join in our picnic which will be held in the People’s Park. Here is how we can be found: After you go into the park, walk on till you see a river. Cross it and make a turn towards the right. Then a hill will be seen by you. Walk around to the other side of the hill, and a lake will be found by you. We will have our picnic in the small wood which is by the lake. I am sure you will have no trouble in finding us. We’re so glad you will join in our picnic which will be held in the People’s Park. Here is how we can be found: After you go into the park, walk on till you see a river. Cross it and make a turn towards the right, then a hill will be seen by you. Walk around to the other side of the hill, and a lake will be found by you. We will have our picnic in the small wood which is by the lake. I am sure you will find us without any difficulty. Have you found it? Build up a concise passage Requirements : Write a story about dog. Use the first person: e.g. my pa