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智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料 十个托福写作失败开头案例-智课教育旗下智课教育 在托福写作中，有一个良好的开篇，会给阅卷考官一个良好的印象 ，但是有些文章的开头却不是很好的，智课教育考试小编就来列举十个 托福写作失败开头案例，希望考生能够引以为戒。 万事开头难，好的开始就是成功的一半，所以在托福写作中，有一 个良好的开篇，会给阅卷考官一个良好的印象，但是有些文章的开头却 不是很好的，在此智课教育考试小编就来列举十个托福写作失败开头案 例，希望考生能够引以为戒。 一、废话连篇不知所云型 典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? Poor：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… Better: In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married. Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? Poor: OK, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Better: People who are used to obtain the knowledge from books may have noticed the significant change in recent years-if they would like to know the history of an oriental country or the name of an unknown frog found in the wildness, they are always recommended to find it on Wikipedia instead of a printed one. One day, these new technology will replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information. 二、中式英文人见人晕型 典型失败案例： Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…… Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there. Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I