托福写作十大“坑人”的开头-智课教育旗下智课教育.pdfVIP

智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料 托福写作十大“坑人”的开头-智课教育旗下智课教育 托福写作的开头是给阅卷老师留下的第一印象，因此非常重要。因 此，如果开头失利的话，那么可能就会给后面的内容造成不利的影响。 所以，本文小编和大家分享托福写作十大“坑人”开头。 托福写作好的开头会给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象，但是，相反， 如果你的开头真的不怎么样的话。那么，即使后面的内容写得有多么好 ，那么，估计分数也高不了多少。因此，托福写作开头至关重要，不可 以草草了事。接下来，智课教育小编给大家介绍一些坑人的托福写作开 头，帮助考生看清本质，把握高分。 “坑人”托福写作开头之一：废话连篇不知所云(喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。 Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really important! “坑人”托福写作开头之二 ：中式英文人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆ ☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…… Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。 Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things…… Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。 “坑人”托福写作开头之