2017_2018学年高中英语Unit9Wheels单元写作指导课件北师大版必修3.pptVIP

-*- ◆ 全书优质试题随意编辑 ◆ 课堂教学流程完美展示 ◆ 独家研发错题组卷系统 -*- -*- 单元写作指导如何写一份书面报告 写作指导 本单元要求写一篇书面报告,时态应以一般现在时为主。写作内容可以是调查报告,也可以是某地的交通情况、教育现状或学情调查等。同时,在文后进行归纳总结或陈述观点,表明自己的看法等。因此本文兼具说明和议论特征。 这种话题作文的提示方式,通常以图表、表格或文字方式等进行提示,相对来说,提示内容比较具体,而总结或陈述观点部分则需要自己搜集材料或整理思路来完成任务,这是“开放”的部分,也是展示自己写作水平和材料组织能力的地方。 表格或图表提示方式的作文,要点较多,头绪相对较乱。因此,在表达时,要注意适当地对所给信息进行整合,并采用概括、简洁的语言灵活地表达,切忌按所给提示一一罗列,从而导致篇幅超长、语言冗余等问题。 常用表达 1.Recently,I have conducted a survey among... 2.On the one hand,there is/are... 3.However,there are many things which could be improved. 4.In conclusion,something needs to be done to control the traffic. 5.There are some advantages about...On the other hand,there are some disadvantages. 6.According to the survey,... 写作结构 一般来说,这种类型的作文要分成如下三部分: 第一部分:引子(或简单介绍相关调查情况); 第二部分:分析图表/表格(或指出原因或理由); 第三部分:阐述自己的观点或对这个问题的建议等。 针对训练 假设你是李徽,你最近就你所在地区的交通状况在一些社区进行了调查。现请你根据调查结果(如下表)给你们当地的交通部门写一份报告,报告当地的交通状况,并提出你的看法或建议: 注意:1.报告应包括表格中的所有内容,可适当发挥; 2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.词数100左右。 Recently,we have conducted a survey on the local transport situation in some communities. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 参考范文 Recently,we have conducted a survey on the local transport situation in some communities.The results are as follows.? On the one hand,there are some advantages about our local transport:wide,neat main roads,convenient buses and cheap fares.On the other hand,there are some disadvantages:imperfect traffic facilities,traffic jams,serious air pollution and some people who don’t observe traffic rules. Personally,I think that our local government should first educate motorists to obey traffic rules.Second,it is supposed to build more traffic facilities such as parking lots,road