IELTS雅思9分作文欣赏.doc

IELTS雅思9分作文欣赏 中国人写的雅思作文有结构但语言不够地道；native speaker写的文章够地道，但不够雅思！因此，市面上总找不到“完美”的雅思例文。 无忧雅思网 xZk-@
S l}　　此次，我特别邀请我的美国朋友（同样研究和教授雅思）“按照我的要求”写了一些文章，这里逐一贴出来，让大家分享一下，呵呵。。。 buR0wtjZ0 l+R)wxB+d8yn(G0　　Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? []U$vo Xd0 d/`3t)S C6Z*nU7a(T0　　Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the ‘real world’ when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties .? The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination. （ 58words ）无忧雅思网8m#`u2N.ig 无忧雅思网 B1r4fBb 　　点评： 1+ 1 ’ 模式，最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句： but in fact require closer examination ，感觉是在抛砖引玉。 g2@8DV,h*X
[(_%@m0 -WV7p+lv,REJ0　　The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching moneywhen times get tough in adulthood.? Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood.? They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility.? This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education. （100words） B5wGg Jg4b#[7M`0 1|(h+x4x1o,Wiub6[.`0　　点评： 1 ’ +3 模式，第 1 句是主题句。请注意，从此段的内容来看，这是个让步段（即分析自己并不赞成的观点）。虽然 4 段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论，但是本人还是喜欢这样的写作，即主体段的观点还是有侧重的，把让步段放在前面，最后 1 句话引出下一段，这样过度地很自然，而且自己的观点也比较明确！ k@} LW+k t sr0 f VF;y0b7|dW0　　The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that c