专业英语课件-SpecE_chapter6_writing_2011.ppt

Chinese writers often preface the main topic of a sentence by first stating the purpose, location, reason, examples and conditions as introductory elements. However, this has the effect of demoting the importance of the main idea and making the reader think the auther is indirect. Bring the main idea to the beginning of the sentence stating any purpose, locations, reasons, etc., afterwards. Incorrect: To ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality, CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production. Correct: CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production to ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality. 英文表达注意事项 (2) Main idea at the beginning Incorrect: For the application in automobile interiors, this paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing. Correct: This paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing for application in automobile interiors. Incorrect: Inside the test box, the space was filled with asbestos. Correct: The space inside the test box was filled with asbestos. 英文表达注意事项 (2) Main idea at the beginning Incorrect: Especially when numerical control (NC) techniques are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods bring a huge economical benefits, the advantage of constructing 3D model becomes extremely obvious. Correct: The advantage of constructing 3D model becomes extremely obvious when numerical control (NC) techniques are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods bring a huge economical benefits. 英文表达注意事项 (2) Main idea at the beginning Incorrect: In practice, we employed this approach to dispose of a wheelhouse subassembly of one kind of auto-body, and the results show that this method is feasible. Correct: We employed this approach to dispose of a wheelhouse subassembly of one kind of auto-body, and the results show that this method is feasible. 英文表达注意事项 (2) Main idea at the beginning Tendency of p