2013年全国通用高考写作技能逐步提升14句子润色简单句合并成复合句.pptVIP

* * 有时为了使句子的连贯性更强, 表达也更为贴切、自然, 我们在两个或者多个简单句之间加上and, but, or(或者, 否则), for(因为), while(而, 却), when (就在这个时候), not only…but also等并列连词, 使其成为并列复合句。如： 句子润色：简单句合并成复合句 (1) Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours. We’ll be back at about 11 o’clock. →Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock. (2) You must hurry. You’ll miss the plane. →You must hurry or you’ll miss the plane. (3) Honey is sweet. The bee stings. →Honey is sweet but the bee stings. 在两个或者多个简单句之间加上when, after, as, because, where, which, who等从属连词, 可以使简单句变成复合句。如： (1) We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club. We can not only practise but also learn more English in the activities.（改为含定语从句的复合句） →We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club in which we can not only practise but also learn more English. (2) He missed the first bus. He came to school late.(改为含状语从句的复合句) →Because he missed the first bus, he came to school late. →He missed the first bus, so he came to school late. 即时练习 将下列各组句子合并成并列复合句或主从复合句。 1. Your study becomes much more difficult. You have to work much harder. 1. Your study becomes much more difficult, so you have to work much harder. 2. We should be easy-going. We should be concerned for others. We want to be liked by others. If we want to be liked by others, we should be easy-going and concerned for others. 3. (1) Li Hua is a senior one student. (2) She had to attend different enrichment classes (3) She had to do a lot of homework during the summer vacation. (4) This made her unhappy. (5) she wanted to relax herself. Li Hua, a senior one student, had to attend different enrichment classes and do a lot of homework during the summer vacation, which made her unhappy, as she wanted to relax herself. 4. (1)We high school students do have some growing pains. (2)We can get rid of them correctly and wisely. We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely