作文讲评2015全国卷.pptx

Welcome to our class;To Better Your Composition ;Everyday reciting;5. 丰富课外生活 enrich our afterschool life 6. 展示才艺 Shine one’s skills 7.生动有趣而且增长见闻 interesting and informative ;1.我想知道你能否帮我忙来陪我出席这次会议 I wonder if you could do me a favour to attend this meeting as a company. 2.您的出席对参赛者来讲会是一个很大的激励。 Your attendance would be a great motivation for the participants. 3.参赛者要进行才艺展示，比如唱歌或朗诵。 Participants are requested to try to shine their skills like singing a song or reciting a poem. ;4.你越努力，进步越大。 The harder you work, the more progress you will make. 5. 面对严重问题，对我们来讲采取有效措施是十分重要的。 Faced with severe problems, it is of vital importance for us to take effective measures.;暴露问题;审体裁 审人称 审时态 审要点;2015年全国卷1 作文题目;三段式;The program of “Foreign Cultures” is of popularity among us students.;用词要准确！;Good sentences;⑤Would you please write something about American festivals and customs. ⑥It would be better if you could show us your colorful school life. ⑦ I would appreciate it very much if you could … ⑧ I would be truly grateful if you could do me this favour. ⑨ Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer. ⑩ Looking forward to your early reply. ;Transition words and phrases;Transition words and phrases;Because of foreign culture is popular of our students, our school want to write about some articles about it. “Foreign Cultures” column/section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.;I hope you would not mind write an article about your festivals and customs.;Sentences correction;It’s length is about 400 words and the deadline will be June 28th.;If you are convenient, I hope you can send it to me before June 28th. ;Enjoy beautiful sentences;It is evident that not only can it broaden our horizons, but also it can make a better cultural bridge between us.(付梦雨 徐红红 姚成阳 ) If it is convenient to you, please send your article to me before June 28th.(周坤英) I would appreciate it very much if you c