20122013学年高三英语译林版一轮总复习课件模块六Unit 1Laughter is good for you（江苏专用）_1.pptVIP

三、结尾 参考句式： 1．In a word, we must eat healthily and take more exercise to keep fit. 2．In short, if we want to keep fit, we must have a good habit and do more physical exercise. 3．As is said above, the healthier we eat, the fitter we will be. 可用来表示总结的短语： in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all等。 【范文点评】 How to Be Healthy? ①Today, with the fast pace of life and work, people like eating all kinds of fast food.Besides, the convenient vehicles make people keep away from walking. ②Because of these，more and more people are confronted with the threat of sub-health, for example, some can’t sleep well, some are always feeling tired and so on. ③But how can we change these and keep fit? ④First, I think a healthy balanced diet is very important for everyone.Less meat, fatty and fast food, more vegetables and enough fruit are good for our health. ⑤Only when we are in a hurry can we have some junk food, but not often.Second，we should take enough exercise because exercise can keep us energetic all the time. ⑥In a word, the better we get into good eating habits and the more we take exercise, the healthier our bodies will be. 点评： ①with介词短语的使用增加了句子的灵活性。 ②关联词使句子上下衔接自然。 ③but领起下文，使文章自然过渡到作者要表达的内容。 ④first，second序数词的使用使文章清晰地表达出要表达的观点。 ⑤本句为以only开头的倒装句。不同句式的使用显示出深厚的语言功底，使文章增色不少。 ⑥总结句的使用使文章首尾呼应，内容充实圆满。 【类题尝试】 当今，有些家长选择用金钱奖励孩子在学习上的进步。请根据以下提示用英语写篇短文。 1．分析这种现象产生的原因及危害(工作繁忙，溺爱孩子，不利于孩子成长……)； 2．你对这种现象的看法。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Nowadays more and more parents choose to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies. Why? Most parents devote themselves to their careers