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OG12 NO.11. The Glass House Mountains in Queensland, Australia,were sighted in 1770 by the English navigator Captain James Cook, by whom they were named supposedly because its sheer wet rocks glistened like glass.(A) by whom they were named supposedly because its(B) by whom they were named supposedly and their(C) naming them supposedly since their(D) who so named them supposedly because their(E) who so named it since supposedly their(1).前后对应: 单复数。文章的主语是mountains，复数，因此E选项中代词it错误，可以首先排除。(2).修饰语及从句: 被动变主动。A，B选项都用的被动句by whom they were, 在后面紧跟着另一个被动句的情况下，为避免罗嗦，应该改为主动句who so named….(3).修饰语及从句: 缺少连接词。B中缺少了一个表因果关系的连接词,不能引导出James Cook给这些山命名的原因。(4).修饰语及从句: 修饰对象合理性。C中naming描述的对象不是James Cook.(5).逻辑关系: since/because。C中的since没有表现出这个句子的重要因果关系。Because用在这里更恰当。----------------------------------------------------------华丽的分割线-----------------------------------------------------------------(1).主动语态和被动语态: A，B使用被动结构,而且跟在另一被动结构后,啰嗦。(2).代词指代: A当中的its和E当中的it无法指代复数主语名词the glass house mountains。(3).缺少连接词: B当中缺少表示因果关系的连接词，无法解释Why JC gave the mountains name。(4).修饰对象的合理性 since/because: C当中James Cook无法作介词since的宾语，同时无法做从句的主语，naming无法修饰James Cook。since是连词，但是无法取代because表示强烈的因果关系。OG所列考点: 修辞结构;??前后一致词汇: sheer---adj.陡峭的，垂直的? ?;? ?glisten---v.湿物闪耀，闪亮----------------------------------------------------------啰嗦的分割线-----------------------------------------------------------------(1).代词指代单复数: its与mountains没有对应，应该改为their。(2).主动被动简洁性: by whom they were named..被动结构太wordy和不直接，尤其跟在一个另一个被动句后面(were sighted)。(3).缺少连接词: B中缺少连接词(because)来解释命名原因。(4).修饰对象的合理性: C中naming分词按句子理解是修饰mountains，而不是Cook。(5).since / because: C和E中的介词since没有表现出重要的因果逻辑关系。----------------------------------------------------------无语的分割线-----------------------------------------------------------------(1).指代: 单数代词不能指代复数名词。(2).动词形态: 主动被动。主动和被动都可以的情况下,优先使用主动,特别是存在双重被动的情况。(3).分词不定式: 现在分词做伴随状语。1.表伴随动作,主语为主句主语 2.表结果,主语为主句整句话。(4).逻辑: 原句合理重心不能随意改变。原句的原因状语从句被改为了并列成分,改变了合理重心。-------------------------------------------------------