2012专四作文指导.pptVIP

Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development． 改进：Since people are never satisfied with their status quo，they want further development. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money． 改进：The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money． They like an active life but not a peaceful life． 改进：They like an active life rather than a peaceful one． Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money． 改进：Some cigarettes may cost even more. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery