义务教育2013-年高考英语作文写作指南：如何写好高考作文描写文.docVIP

高考备考：如何写好高考作文描写文 　　描写文就是用语言文字来描绘人物、地点、物品或场景。描写文一般通过表现感觉的细节展开，描述人们通过五官所得到的印象与感受。写描写文时要精心挑选能体现所描绘对象的突出特征的细节，使人读后能抓住其主要特征，如见其人，如见其物，如临其境。 　　请看下面的例子： 　　1.描写地点 　　我们的寝室 　　[题材] 　　以“Our Bedroom”为题写一篇不少于120词的短文，介绍一下你寝室的位置和内部陈设。 　　[范文] 　　Our Bedroom 　　Our bedroom, shared by 4 students, is on the second floor of No.3 Students Dormitory Building①. It is a small room，about 15 square meters, and with white ceiling and green walls. As you enter the room, straight ahead you will see two large windows. Under the left window is my bed, which is covered with a blue sheet. Above mine is Xiaodongs bed. Chen Weis bed is under the right window, and Zhang Lu lives above him. In the middle of the room, there are two desks and four chairs. A lamp is hung in the middle of the ceiling. Behind the door, there is a built-in closet②, where we put our belongings. 　　[注释] 　　①No.3 Students Dormitory Building 学生第三宿舍楼 　　②a built-in closet 墙柜 　　[评析] 　　本文先介绍了寝室的位置，接着按空间顺序由上至下、由左至右、由外及里——描述了寝室的布局，结构清晰，语言平实、简洁。 　　我们的学校 　　[题材] 　　下图为北京101中学平面图(diagram)，请将此图用英语作具体说明(词数60-80)，以便向参观者介绍该中学的校园风貌。A.学校大门 B.图书馆 C.花池 D.实验楼 E.教学楼(四层，两头为教师办公室) F.食堂 G.操场(校园四周均为树木) 　　[范文] 　　Our School 　　Ladies and Gentlemen, 　　This is the diagram of Beijing No.101 Middle School. It is 720 meters long and 480 meters wide. Its gate faces south. In the middle of the school stands the four-storeyed teaching building with teaching offices at both ends. In front of it lies a flower garden. On the left of it is the school library building, and on the right, the lab building. There is a large playground behind the teaching building. Beside the playground is the dining house. Trees are planted all around the school. How beautiful the school looks! Welcome to visit our school. 　　[评析] 　　本文按一定的空间顺序，即由整体到部分，由左至右，由前至后地介绍了学校的布局。文中方位词及倒装句的运用使上下文有机地衔接起来。全文行文连贯，表达清楚。 2.描写人物 　　表哥——我的榜样 　　[题材] 　　我表哥是一个勤奋而细心的学生。他立志长大后当一名科学家。为此，他刻苦学习数理化和英语。他以伽俐略为榜样，仔细观察周围的事物。为证实自己的某些想法，他总是反复做实验。他经常失败，但从不失去信心。 　　根据以上所给内容，写一篇词数为100左右的英语短文。 　　[范文] 　　A Good Example to Me-My Cous